Score: 2

"you're creative"

submission: Lost Heart

date: July 21, 2005

That was radiohead? I would've sworn it was Rufus Wainwright. Good choice of music no matter who it was.

The text at the beginning wasn't displayed long enough, I couldn't read everything you'd written before it was off the screen.

Interesting ideas, however, and I really liked the title too.

Score: 5

"Thank You"

submission: Love Imposters

date: July 21, 2005

Just when I was getting tired of clocks and locks and glocks and rocks (I actually groaned in dismay when I first saw the strawberry in this flash) thank you thank you thank you NO MORE ME-TOO FLASH

Score: 5

"loved it"

submission: Floating Card

date: July 21, 2005

Very entertaining and well done. You're a talented magician. I liked the music alot too. It was unique, as well, I've never seen a magic trick on newgrounds before. It rocked. Congratulations on a job well done.

Score: 4

"awesome idea"

submission: Runaway Shinobi

date: July 21, 2005

This is an excellent idea, and the art is great. I feel it was rushed tho. Like you didn't have the patience to do justice to your concept, because it must've taken a month or more already to achieve this, and it would probably take three or four times as long to bring it to the level it could be at.

Also, the girl reading the dialogue was not clear speaking at times, not very easy to hear.

I watched this because of your most excellent submission I just saw, The Zero Dragon. If the reviews of this flash caused you to create The Zero Dragon, then you have no reason to complain. Because, in effect, these reviews that enraged you, inspired you to create a flash that was superior to this one in quality. You took the reviews and processed what they said and channeled that anger correctly and have improved your art drastically.

I like how you have this flash on your favorite flash list. If you don't have faith in yourself, you can't expect anyone else to have faith in you. I doubt you'll be getting too many more zeros in your lifetime, dude. Your work is headed straight for the top.

Score: 7

"excellent point"

submission: The Zero Dragon Ep.1

date: July 21, 2005

This is exactly why I don't trash artists or their work in my reviews. Because I've never done flash myself. I try very hard to stick to the absolute facts.

I will give zeros however. Because I don't have to be a pilot to know when a plane is crashing. I don't have to be a chef to know when the beans are burnt, and I don't have to be an appliance repairmen to know when a vacuum cleaner *sucks*. So to say and imply only flash artists can give other flash artists zeros is entirely incorrect.

A zero is not, in and of itself, disrespectful.

Score: 5

"stick figures that aren't amateur"

submission: PLOLE

date: July 20, 2005

very well done indeed kudos to you

make it longer, and lose the mystery play button

Score: 7

"excellent work"

submission: Exterminators

date: July 20, 2005

I really liked it. It's original, it's well thought out, it's very well drawn, the music was excellent, my only complaint, and it's a tiny one, is the ending was jarring... the music stopped playing in the middle of a line, which made me think the flash was going to continue on, then it suddenly stopped. It was like getting jack-slapped... it should've stopped it at a break in the lyrics, after a refrain, or just let it keep playing until the viewer clicks the X... but that's minor, very minor. It doesn't detract from the overall quality of this flash at all.

Score: 8

"FINISH IT!!!"

submission: Revolution Daucus Carota

date: July 16, 2005

I placed you on my favorite artists so I'll know when/if you do submit a complete flash, or start a series (even better)

Score: 3

"several good ideas"

submission: ©

date: July 16, 2005

any one or all of these movie clips would make an excellent animation if you finished them.

Score: 1

"another clock film"

submission: Introducing Bad Egg Clock

date: July 16, 2005

This wasn't so bad, the music was ok, interesting choice of song. The animation was sort of simple, but the art was good.