Score: 9

"wow"

submission: Whats he buildin in there

date: July 24, 2005

Keep it going, develop this to the end, I'm curious as hell now. Very very clever, intelligent, and well thought out.

This will be amazing if you finish it. Please do.

Score: 8

"what time is it"

submission: A Day With Breadfruit

date: July 24, 2005

this was great. the clock lock glock rock stuff is yesterday. too many people doing it but this was good.

Score: 3

"no more ME TOO flash"

submission: Gladlock Makes Friends

date: July 23, 2005

enough with the locks and glocks and clocks already

you got way more than enough talent to come up with your own stories and characters

lose the crew dude

Score: 6

"well there you have it"

submission: Bad Aftertaste

date: July 23, 2005

great artwork, everything was tight I was kind of surprised to see the artist is 28, I figured about 12 or 13 with all the gay charges and counter charges the story kind of jumped around from nothing to nothing but in it's defense I must say the artwork was great. I was impressed enough with the quality of the artwork and the smoothness of the flash to give it a 4

Score: 8

"this was great"

submission: Samurai Sword 2

date: July 23, 2005

Excellent art, great story, you have a wickedly funny sense of humor. You're going to be one of the best on Newgrounds I know that for a fact. Loose the gradeschool obsession with the F word... that kind of stuff is funny from about the age of 7 to 12... Your comic wit is way too advanced to rely on a cheap tactic like that. Leave that to the people that draw 7 second stick fights and submit them to blam after blam after blam.

Score: 8

"an anti-climax"

submission: Arrogancy: Episode One

date: July 23, 2005

I go thru 4 chapters that constitute the prologue, with the constant assurance at every stage that the 'real' series begins in Episode 1, only to find Episode 1 is also a prologue.

And apparently nothing has been done beyond Ep. 1, for 2 years, and the 'official website' appears to have been long abandoned.

It's a tragedy, this series reeks of potential.

The guy's voice is a little bit better. Still kind of soft. Hard to hear in some spots as well.

Score: 7

"losing the voices was a HUGE improvement"

submission: Arrogancy: Chapter 3 (SV)

date: July 23, 2005

This is the best one yet because you don't have to listen to the voices. And Arrogancy isn't walking around with that vapid imbecilic look on his face when he's supposed to be fighting for his life, like he was in the first 2.

The 'official website' seems to have been abandoned.

Reading on this series, it seems like it was supposed to be composed on a grand scale, and it doesn't seem as if it's been developed according to the master plan.

I hope the artist decides to carry out his original concept someday, because it's a fascinating story.

Score: 8

"Very good work"

submission: Talon VS Salocin - Part 1

date: July 23, 2005

A carefully crafted flash, with skilled artwork, good voices, excellent graphics, very appealing. You state that this is your highest quality flash to date, I believe this is some of the highest quality work I've seen on Newgrounds. And the music was just as well done. Props to your brothers band.

Score: 3

"a test of my core beliefs"

submission: [Blobs]

date: July 23, 2005

My best friend actually did die of AIDS in 1991 so I was shocked at first, but listened to the words of the 2 songs carefully, and decided that although I wouldn't care to hear them at all, and find them in poor taste they didn't severely offend me or enrage me. I'd rather not hear them again, though, that's for sure. But hey, freedom of speech, 1st Amendment, right? What I devoted my life to defending while serving in the Navy. I don't believe in censorship.

Score: 4

"I hate war"

submission: deletenak01

date: July 21, 2005

And I spent all of my 20's in the Navy, so I'm not a weepy bleeding heart anti-war protester. I like how you point out the human cost of war, without being overtly political, and anti-American/anti-Bush.